precious little fictions in 500 words (or less).
Fiction 05/15/08

Groove

by Claudia Smith

Someone gave them a blender after they got married in Vegas; the blender made them both happy, because it was fancy and probably cost more than all their garage-sale clothes and furniture combined. In the mornings, she made smoothies. She bought the fruits she grew up with but were harder to come by here: mangoes, guavas, star fruits, papayas. Vegas had been wonderful, but he didn’t like it. They would have a real wedding, he said, when they could afford one. In Vegas she’d remembered the smell of wood chips and warm flannel. She was sure, when they got back, she’d feel married. He didn’t gamble. They ate $4.99 steaks and she ordered glasses and glasses of red wine. When they asked her what kind, she’d say “the house wine.” She brought a spangled halter top home, along with dozens of dazzling postcard pictures of the Vegas she loved most, a Vegas from the 70s she’d seen in movies, set to jazzy action music.

Now, they were a family. His family was large and old, occupying most of a small cemetery on the hill at the edge of a small town. She knew he would never leave them. This might mean he would never leave her. She liked coming in from the cold, pulling and peeling off layers of clothing, then climbing under the covers for warmth. “The biggest problem with this place,” she told him, “is that I’ll never look good in knit hats. But I like snowflakes.”

After a few months, she told him to stop washing his long hair with Ivory soap, and shared her strawberry shampoo with him. He said he was tired of smoothies and they put the complicated blender away; it was difficult to wash anyway. When he came home from his nightshift, she’d wait for him in the kitchen, cooking. She fried the eggs sunny side up, and he said, “I like it this way.” He let his hand drop down, grazing her hips, and this was like nothing she’d known before, and she kept on frying.



  1. 6 Comments
  2. Priscilla Kipp  Nice! so many well-chosen details, so artfully used. thanks!
    May 19, 2008
  3. Stacey Everett  This is great! I love it! Thank you for sharing your work!
    May 23, 2008
  4. Jerry File Jr.   This is a good story that sets up nicely and quickly at the front, and then gives a good, short story after. Really nice.
    Jun 24, 2008
  5. Kristan  I agree that this piece has great details, and we get a good sense of the couple just from this brief but compelling story! Thank you for sharing.
    Nov 11, 2008
  6. Auburn Sheaffer  I read this twice and was moved by it. I'm newly married at age 45 and this captured the mystery and change in the transaction. Eventually I want to try my hand at shorts. They have the same affect on me as haiku. Love this piece.
    Jan 8, 2009
  7. John Praw  This really leaves me thinking a lot of things. A lot of questions. It's nice work.
    Feb 1, 2010


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