precious little fictions in 500 words (or less).
Story from Issue 12 10/02/07

Mine

by Szilvia Molnar

I used to call her My oh my because she was the girl that braided her hair with yours and she was the one that woke up in the morning with grass stains on her ankles and dew on her shoulders.

In high school she came up to me and grabbed me by the arm. We walked up the stairs that led to the fourth floor and sat on a bench next to the darkroom. I looked at the long row of lockers and how its locks seemed so pleased being together. She pulled up my sleeve and bit me ’til it left a mark. She left me a scent of giggles and a note on my skin saying: “Now you’ll remember me.”

I walked around for five days with a bruise that had the backside of a rainbow and screams of My oh my. I’ve never been so angry before.

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  1. 5 Comments
  2. Tony Press  That is a lovely piece of writing--and while I am a great fan of very short fiction--I was disappointed that this one wasn't longer! But then I remembered it is only an excerpt--and, happily, I have a subscription to this jewel of a magazine.
    Sep 13, 2007
  3. Eunju Namkung  This is not only fantastic, it's fantastical. This My oh my character is so amusing and eccentric, I can't help but love her. I share the same sentiment for the wonderful words.
    Feb 18, 2008
  4. Sarah  She left me a scent of giggles and a note on my skin saying: "Now you'll remember me." Beautiful.
    Mar 4, 2008
  5. Jack Leyden  Resonates, still. How could one ever forget someone like this?
    Aug 13, 2008
  6. Jack.a@luukku.com  It's odd, but one never forgets this kind of thing. As the years pass, the sense of lack -- increases.
    Jan 9, 2011


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