precious little fictions in 500 words (or less).
Story from Issue 11
04/17/07

Why I Said No

by Elizabeth Stamford

Your mother was much older than I expected; already shriveled and slippered. In the kitchen, she served us Minute Maid lemonade, which we spiked with Old Grandad when she’d shuffled off for a nap. We drank quickly, swallowing shards of ice. When we’d finished, you took my hand and pulled me out of the back door into the yard where I stopped short against a gleaming slab surrounded by daisies.

“Granite,” you said, and I remembered an essay I’d received from a student—one in which he claimed to have been “taken for granite.” The other granite—that by my foot—was mottled like moribund flesh, flecked with silver. When I lifted my eyes from it, I saw that the garden was filled with headstones. You told me they marked the graves of your mother’s cats, all of which had died of natural causes. Tapping on a stone with your steel-capped toe, you said, “Here’s my old ferret.”

When I let go of your hand and bent down for a closer look, I saw that the dead animals had people names: Peter, Rosetta, and Gemma.

“My dad’s an engraver,” you explained. “He’s the best in the county.”

Without asking if I wanted to see, you threaded me around the gravestones and led me into your father’s workshop. The machinery was silent, but I felt the man’s presence as keenly as the whiskey in my blood. I saw a tarnished glove, a drill cap, a wad of blue Kleenex, a layer of black silt on the workbench. You touched the glove, ran a finger through the silt. With your back to me, you said, “Dad’s been teaching me how. I could do one for you—if you want.”

“For me?” I must have sounded appalled, but you didn’t seem to notice.

“Dad already made one for each of us. Look.”

You pulled aside a shroud and there they were: your name, his, and hers, each carved deep into a glossy shoulder of stone.

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  1. 4 Comments
  2. Jefferson Navicky  The description 'already shriveled and slippered' is one of the more refreshingly flippant and poignant remarks I've read in the past few days. And "Here's my old ferret" also has a certain bestiary appeal. The whole piece reminds me of a scene from John Irving's "Prayer for Owen Meany" in which Owen offers to use his prodigious stone carving abilities to slice off Johnny's finger so Johnny doesn't get drafted. I've always wanted my own gravestone; I'd put a quote from Mei-Mei Bersenbrugge on it, fill in the death date, and if I lived beyond the date, I'd be on bonus time. I'd go live in Cuba and start a body shop.
    May 3, 2007
  3. Marie Shield  The excerpt from this story is incredible writing. I'm not normally an envious person, but, oh my, I wish I'd written that. I opened the rest of the excerpt and what a delightful premise for a story...great title for it. I also normally don't gush on like this.
    Jun 12, 2007
  4. Terrie Leigh Relf  I love this piece for many reasons. . . . One, is the feeling I can't shake that the narrator is not far from the grave. Another, is how skillfully this is wrought--even if my feeling is way off base. Death has an uncanny ability to teach us of life. How sweetly she takes "all this" in. . . .
    Jun 13, 2007
  5. Tania Casselle  Terrific piece! From the "shriveled and slippered" to the "shards of ice" to the "shoulder of stone"--it's all very chilling. The cat graveyard was strong enough, then it goes further, as we're "'threaded around the gravestones." I've read this through several times, and each reading feels harder, colder, darker, glossier--more questions provoked. Great stuff.
    Jun 14, 2007


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